Wednesday, July 13, 2016

Sizzle Fizzled


 “Our life needs more ‘sizzle’,”
Said Husby. To me.
And I wondered just what in the world could he mean?

So I went to the lexicon,
Searched the word there.
I admit that the things that I found made me stare.

It said ‘sizzle’s a hissing sound,
Water—hot steel.
Which happens whenever I’m making a meal.

It also suggested
To burn up or sear.
Sounds to me like a branding iron on a calf’s rear.

Or the hissing sound made
When burning or frying.
That happened last night. He thought something was dying.

And lastly, to seethe
With deep anger: resent.
Now I’m really unsure just what my Husby meant.

So to my dear friends,
Use a whisper. (Don’t shout.)
Can you tell me what life with more ‘sizzle’s’ about?


Once a month, Karen of Baking in a Tornado issues a poetry challenge:
"Here's a topic. Write!"
July's challenge?
SIZZLE
What did you think of my attempt?

To see what her other challengers did with the topic, go to:
Baking in a Tornado:  http://www.bakinginatornado.com/201...
Measurements of Merriment: http://measurementsofmerriment.blogspot.com/...
The Bergham Chronicles: http://lberghamchronicles.blogspot.com/...
Spatulas On Parade: http://spatulasonparade.blogspot.com/...
Cluttered Genius: http://www.clutteredgenius.com/summer-lovin/You'll be glad you did!



8 comments:

  1. Oh my gracious, I adore this. I have to admit that I enjoyed the cadence as well as the language. :)

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  2. LOL, if love could just burn as easily as dinner!

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  3. Loving this poem! Very creative. Great job this month! :)

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  4. Absolutely love it!! So creative. Awesome!!

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  5. Well done! But then poetry and you get along very well together all the rest of the time, too!

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  6. This is a fabulous effort. You're so good at fun poetry.
    I think in this case when husby needs more'sizzle' he might mean a little more impromtu excitement, some spur of the moment fun.

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  7. Very good. I don't even attempt poetry. I have no rhythm at all!

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